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Whacha think of the comic so far? |
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tanlaithial Serf
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 5 Location: Earth - I think...
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:47 am Post subject: Shameless Advertising - ARAMAS |
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This is sorta like my exhibiting my artwork; ARAMAS ( http://aramas.comicgenesis.com ) is my new webcomic that I am trying desperately to get started, and I just want to make sure it's known and not just some obscure little comic that's got two people reading it.
It hasn't been updated in a long time because 1, I'm very busy with stuff this summer (including writing essays), and 2, because they are moving the servers (whatever that means) so I can't upload anyway. *Shrug* So I will hopefully get a new page up this next week, but who knows. Again, this is just to get the name of the comic out. The prologue is completely up in case you're interested in looking! Thanks!
Oh, and of course, my devART site: http://naraklak.deviantart.com _________________ Aramas - a webcomic
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
Joined: 10 Oct 2005 Posts: 266
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 7:26 pm Post subject: |
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A big area you could improve is facial expressions. As is my wont, I reccomend a book: The Artist's Guide to Facial Expression by Gary something. Creature design is strong though. |
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DrMcCoy Noble
Joined: 25 Feb 2005 Posts: 157 Location: Braunschweig, Germany
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:32 am Post subject: |
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I dunno, 2 pages + 1 cover isn't an awful lot... _________________
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Prince Cedric Citizen
Joined: 23 Feb 2007 Posts: 15 Location: Almarlia
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:24 am Post subject: |
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It's pretty well drawn, even if there's only a few pages. My advice is, keep at it! (this is good advice for me too). I need more practice but I don't to practice because I'm no good. See a loop here? _________________ Prince Cedric
Prince of Almarlia, Son of King Frederic. |
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Zela Spark
Joined: 05 Feb 2007 Posts: 181 Location: Somewhere you are not...
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 11:26 am Post subject: |
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Ced, you should seriously read that drawing book we have. (Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain) And don't give up, otherwise I'll stop giving you dessert.
tanlaithial, the only real comment I can make is... on the title page, the heroine has a bit of a small hand... my dad (who IS an artist) says that hands should cover the same area as the face. And I'm terrible at doing that, myself. I try to make them too big (not with much success; I'm a wimp): I personally think that big hands look better than small hands. Just look at Henson in this month's caption contest! Also the Tsubasa Chronicle manga draws... huge hands. A bit over done, actually, considering that anime-styled people have smaller faces to make them cuter... _________________ The rain, it raineth every day
Upon the just and unjust fella;
But more upon the just, because
The unjust hath the just's umbrella
-Ogden Nash |
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