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SiB and Creep: The Paragon Project (NSFW)
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SABERinBLUE wrote:

First thing is that the right arm doesn't have bandages, that's the tattoo. first white section from the list should be tattoo, then skin, then tattoo, alternating.

Good thing that arm only has flat lighting on it. Easily fixed.


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Second thing is that it looks like she's lying on the floor. Just darken the values a bit on the wall leading up to the break between floor and bed.
I was wondering about that. I'll see what I can do.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

One last thing. I was playing around with this in GIMP and I find the face in panel 2 looks better without the upper lip line. Can you just nuke that.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SABERinBLUE wrote:
One last thing. I was playing around with this in GIMP and I find the face in panel 2 looks better without the upper lip line. Can you just nuke that.
I did think it looked awfully pouty that way.

Anyway, is this anything now?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ooooh, I love the texture upgrade to the bed. It looks a whole lot more like a bed now. This page is done, capt. Excellent work.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SABERinBLUE wrote:
This page is done, capt.


Phew.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey, how are you on gore? I've got a page almost ready to go, but I'd like to know whether I can send you some graphic reference pics I got a guy to find me on rotten.com of a dude who blew his mind out with a shotgun. I loosely based bits of this page on that, so you might want the ref.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

See, this is why they invented private messaging.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll invent your private messaging.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't have any problems with gore. Hell, I probably won't even need any reference, but keep the pics on hold in case I get stumped.

And what about PM's? Me don't understand.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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And what about PM's? Me don't understand.


I don't fully understand it myself. I'll have the next page very shortly, in like maybe an hour or so.
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