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Creep Noble
Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 124 Location: Up nord.
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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SABERinBLUE wrote: |
First thing is that the right arm doesn't have bandages, that's the tattoo. first white section from the list should be tattoo, then skin, then tattoo, alternating. |
Good thing that arm only has flat lighting on it. Easily fixed.
Quote: | Second thing is that it looks like she's lying on the floor. Just darken the values a bit on the wall leading up to the break between floor and bed. | I was wondering about that. I'll see what I can do. _________________ The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly |
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
Joined: 10 Oct 2005 Posts: 266
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:22 pm Post subject: |
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One last thing. I was playing around with this in GIMP and I find the face in panel 2 looks better without the upper lip line. Can you just nuke that. |
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Creep Noble
Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 124 Location: Up nord.
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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SABERinBLUE wrote: | One last thing. I was playing around with this in GIMP and I find the face in panel 2 looks better without the upper lip line. Can you just nuke that. | I did think it looked awfully pouty that way.
Anyway, is this anything now?
_________________ The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly |
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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ooooh, I love the texture upgrade to the bed. It looks a whole lot more like a bed now. This page is done, capt. Excellent work. |
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Creep Noble
Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 124 Location: Up nord.
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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SABERinBLUE wrote: | This page is done, capt. |
Phew. _________________ The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly |
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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Hey, how are you on gore? I've got a page almost ready to go, but I'd like to know whether I can send you some graphic reference pics I got a guy to find me on rotten.com of a dude who blew his mind out with a shotgun. I loosely based bits of this page on that, so you might want the ref. |
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waf Courtier
Joined: 24 Feb 2005 Posts: 99
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 7:34 am Post subject: |
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See, this is why they invented private messaging. |
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:13 pm Post subject: |
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I'll invent your private messaging. |
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Creep Noble
Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 124 Location: Up nord.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject: |
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Don't have any problems with gore. Hell, I probably won't even need any reference, but keep the pics on hold in case I get stumped.
And what about PM's? Me don't understand. _________________ The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly |
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SABERinBLUE Pretty Fly for a Blue Guy
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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Creep wrote: | And what about PM's? Me don't understand. |
I don't fully understand it myself. I'll have the next page very shortly, in like maybe an hour or so. |
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