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[Creep]

Took quite a while of squint-eyed reading to understand what you meant, but I think I got the gist of it.

...Except for the hair.
What guideline? Is that the thing I thought was traces of an erased portion of an earlier attempt at the hair, and why're the sides supposed to go all the way up there?
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The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly

[SABERinBLUE]

Well, the idea is if the hair is spiked up there will be some area on the sides that is kind of like a cliff face and then the area on top will be the spiky part. Like a small mohawk that covers the entire head. The bunch of little lines on the interior of the hair that I drew were a rouch outline of where the break between sides and top is.

[Creep]

What, like a flattop cut, or something along those lines?
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The artist formerly known as Bob Gnarly

[SABERinBLUE]

Well, what might eventually become a flattop cut if it were allowed to continue to grow. It's like a flattop with landscaping to make it fit the shape of the head better and be more spiky and wild.

[Babs]

Very nice Bob. Only crit is that the line of the collarbones are a little too bold. Think that line would be more subtle?

Guys, I am absolutely amazed at what the two of you are able to do together.

[Aja]

Indeed. Can't wait to see more from you guys.
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"The one concession a sane man will never yield the universe is that of considering it seriously."
~ James Branch Cabell

[SABERinBLUE]

So I'm back on concepts. These scenes here aren't really put together with the explicit intention that you color them or anything, Bob, since they're just half-baked sketches. If you get it in your head that you want to color one though, just let me know and I'll throw together a color guide.

This is the president/prime minister/thingy of the world addressing the peoples at the turn of 2200, the centennial of Ashfall.

[SABERinBLUE]

These are aging sketches for TPP's mascot little girl, at least in the early days, an orphan who's taken in off the street by one of the characters. She has several birth defects owing to fetal drug abuse, the most prominent of which is a hormonal imbalance that makes her, while not a dwarf, very short and almost sickly. You'll note that one of the two main growth spurts is skipped. The abnormal growth pattern is why I need a special concept guide, and also I have a special fondness for this character. I tried to do this a little over half a year ago with really poor results and now I'm giving it another whirl. Still to come are six more years, but that involves busting out R-Karen and the jacket so I'm posting these up first. At the top is the year, the bottom is her current sobriquet and age. In between some sketches are explanations of what went on in between.

[waf]

*Looks at Penguin Doll*

I c wut u did thar....

[SABERinBLUE]

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